its a bit cute and a bit different in that you’ve added a little grain and blur to maintain interest. actually i would have preferred to have see a little of the childs eyes because this gives me a sense that i am closed off from the subject i.e. i can’t fully engage with her emotion because i cant see her
otherwise its a very decent pic

Creativitity = 5 Composition = 4
Colours…. = 5 Capture……. = 4
Rated Total = 18